Prelim Task

Saturday, 25 February 2012

The Test shoot

The test shoot went well, obviously having few problems which we expected, since that is the reason we had the test shoot to ensure we do better on our real one. On the day of the shoot we arrived on time and started promptly however we noticed we had few important things missing such as my leather jacket and the blood for the gun shoot. We resolved it by simply just wearing a black vest top which assassins tend to wear as well and cutting out the gun shot only having the shadow of the gun shot.

It was quite successful I may have to say considering our real shoot is tomorrow and we have just had this week to edit and make points for improvement.

Here is our edited test shoot.




Points of improvement :
  • Better iconography cu images from the start such as cigars.
  • Not too many shots of knives looks like he has an obsession for knives or uses them for killing.
  • Show a shot of the money in the suite case. 
  • Have a better entrance for lotus (more build up )
  • Shorter script
  • Lotus shouldn't pour drink- too nice - and real assassin won't do it- also difficult as she would look away from her target- not professional. 
  • Better gun shot
  • No reveal of her face until the end- build enigma 
  • Cut out when she calls her boss

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