It was quite successful I may have to say considering our real shoot is tomorrow and we have just had this week to edit and make points for improvement.
Here is our edited test shoot.
Points of improvement :
- Better iconography cu images from the start such as cigars.
- Not too many shots of knives looks like he has an obsession for knives or uses them for killing.
- Show a shot of the money in the suite case.
- Have a better entrance for lotus (more build up )
- Shorter script
- Lotus shouldn't pour drink- too nice - and real assassin won't do it- also difficult as she would look away from her target- not professional.
- Better gun shot
- No reveal of her face until the end- build enigma
- Cut out when she calls her boss
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